the noise

Slouch  mud splashed over my foot .russel i caught the ball,but
the noise made me

wonder and I got tackled.
i went to the sideline and heard a echo and went to the bush .
i heard a crack. Aaaahhh i saw a duck and
a bunny but the bunny was stuck in the fence whining it heart out.
I quickly got him out and ran to the green lashas grass field.
The wavy wind brasher across my feet giving me the chills.
When kids shouted at me to get the ball I got it “yes” I got a try.

this is me making a story using 1 of our 5 senses