Thursday, 7 November 2019

Ambers party

LI: To use punctuation



4 comments:

  1. Hey Meelah
    This is so cute and I love it. The only feedback I have is that you should check your spelling because you spelt "Spooks" wrong. Other than that I love it. I like how you included all the info and that you love her.
    Great job
    Bye
    Maiya

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  2. Hi Meelah love the blog post and its very cute how you put all those pictures of you and amber also you and tarli. Maybe next time you can put a photo of you and mayia and say who else came to Ambers party and say happy birthday to amber for me
    From chelsey

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  3. Hey Meelah
    This is adorable!
    I like how you wrote a little paragraph of you talking about Amber.
    Maybe next time remember to check you Punctuation.
    Bye

    Ruby T

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  4. Hi Meelah
    I love your blog post I like how you did it about Ambers birthday.
    Maybe next time you can check your spelling.
    Kind regards Tarli

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