Tuesday, 10 September 2019

My Birthday

5 comments:

  1. Hi Meelah!
    Good Post! I like how you added a learning intention, and a image of a cake! Next time you could make sure it makes sense. Other than that, great post, Meelah!

    Lily

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  2. Hi Meelah I liked your blog especially when you said My friends mean the world to me and I don’t know what I would do without them. I agree wouldn't know what to do either.

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  3. Hi Meelah,
    Amazing post it was really detailed and kind.
    Next time maybe you could reread it before you publish it because some of the sentences didn't really make sense.
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    Amelie.f

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  4. Hi Meelah
    I loved your post and the way you added a photo, maybe next time you should make it a bit longer but happy birthday.

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  5. Hi Meelah
    I loved your post and I hope you enjoyed your birthday.I love how you told us who you were spending it with. It sounds like you had a great birthday because of the detail you added but maybe next time be careful with your words because I spotted our in there instead of or and a few more. but apart from that I also loved your photo and how you added in your learning intention,
    Great Post!

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