Hi Meelah I love this poem because it describes Matariki really well. I think you could have put the date and a title to your poem. Over all I think your blog is great. Bye Meelah Maiya
Hi Meelah I like your post about making a dimantic poem. I like all the words that you put into it. It is also good that you put the learning intention on. I think there is nothing that you could change about this blog. Good job. Kaitanu
Hi Meelah, sweat post. I really liked how you showed the learning intention at the top of your writing.Next time you could tell us who you're talking about or a little bit about matariki but otherwise really enjoyed reading you poem but otherwise see ya later patata.
Hi Meelah, I love how you used those particular words. They definitely reminded me of Matariki. I do think you could have added a description at the bottom, but other than that I love your poem. It's really artistic! Ruby H
Hi Meelah nice blog post maybe you can put some color on it to make it look better and i am pretty sure that would look better in my opinion but overall good job
Hi Meelah
ReplyDeleteI love this poem because it describes Matariki really well. I think you could have put the date and a title to your poem. Over all I think your blog is great.
Bye Meelah
Maiya
Hi Meelah
ReplyDeleteI like your post about making a dimantic poem. I like all the words that you put into it. It is also good that you put the learning intention on. I think there is nothing that you could change about this blog. Good job.
Kaitanu
Hi Meelah,
ReplyDeletesweat post. I really liked how you showed the learning intention at the top of your writing.Next time you could tell us who you're talking about or a little bit about matariki but otherwise really enjoyed reading you poem but otherwise see ya later patata.
Hi Meelah,
ReplyDeleteI love how you used those particular words. They definitely reminded me of Matariki. I do think you could have added a description at the bottom, but other than that I love your poem. It's really artistic!
Ruby H
Hi Meelah
ReplyDeletenice blog post maybe you can put some color on it
to make it look better and i am pretty sure that would look better in my opinion but overall good job
hi Meelah
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