APPLES UPDATES
this term we are starting apples and there is a shop that you can trade your apples in and get a prize there is a point that you have to get if you want a prize 10 apples and I am going to work there with Tarli and the student leaders my teacher is helping with it and me and Tarli have to go every monday morning and give them to the teachers of the school. It is open on thursday but I am at choir so I can not go every time me and tarli were going to be the managers but I have choir on thursday and that's the day the shop is open but I do still get to do it there is some cool stuff in there and you should save your apples up for some cool prizes.
Hey Meelah
ReplyDeleteLove your post!
I really like how you added a picture of an apple!
Maybe next time check you capital letters at the start of a sentence and names.
I also like how include what days the store is open on.
Bye
Ruby
hi meelah I love your post that you have done,it is amazing but maybe next time you could make it a bit longer!!!
ReplyDeleteIsla
Hi Meelah
ReplyDeleteI like our blog post. Like how you wrote what days you and Tarli go on. Maybe next time you could put a picture of a apple on your blog other from that it was cool!
From Amelia